I'm not the biggest fan of Evangelion doujins, especially those starring Asuka... Why? It has nothing to do with EVA or Asuka, actually. It's because the overwhelming majority of them I've read fucking sucks, which is solely the responsibility of those that inflict such crap on us all.
But then, revitalizing my faith in all things good and pervy, comes this, and proves that there might just be a God of Porn somewhere out there and that he does listen to our prayers, every once in a while.
And to quote/unquote AnimeLov3rxXx (not really, but meh): "translation = delicious cake"