First let me say that I love the artist and that I'm very thankful for the upload. Now, I don't want to get on the CGrascal hatetrain (this is free for us after all) but just starting at page 5...

Maybe it's hard to find a proofreader for this kind of material?

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Okuu is love <3

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god I love this artist's style. Especially the expressions and hair.

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Chinro he COULD get one but that takes EFFORT. He's all about FIRST! MUST BE FIRST! If he got a proofreader someone ELSE might be FIRST!

Here's to someone ELSE editing it

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Oh god there goes my nutbladder again

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CGrascal "translating" something by this gorgeous artist is a god damn travesty.

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I can tell that this aritst must be a big utsuho fan.

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Thank god for playing H games with a translator. Getting used to the worst of broken Engrish makes it much easier to read CG's translations XD

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If it's something like this, there's not much harm to be done. Though hte odds of someone else doing it is rather slim due to how they put the "already translated" stuff on the bottom of their lists (which only encourages CGRascal's attitude)

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After reading this mildly sullied masterpiece, I hereby swear to never give anything translated by CGrascal five stars. Four stars at best, and that's being really sketchy with the details.
Edit: After seeing the spam-uploads by "GIMME KARMA XD" Goatse, I can say this is a light slap on the wrist compared to those violations of the english language. Still, four stars if the english isn't top-notch.

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Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=5238
HP: http://kuronisiki.sakura.ne.jp/

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On page 14, Yatagarasu must be thinking, "I hate my life."

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