(C81) [Shiroi Shinoshino (Shinoda Kazuhiro)] Hitoinu Banashi translated and edited by myself.
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Also, feel free to leave some feedback, comments and suggestions (specially regarding spelling, fonts, grammar and translation comprehension).

Update: Made some modification in the text following maleh's points and added the DQ 2 reference pointed out by kagamihiiragi. Thank you for the feedbacks.
Getting the hang od updating galleries. Hopefully now everything is done correctly.

Bloody hell, messed up again and I'm not in the mood to bump this yet again so here's a link to the correct version of page 17: http://img280.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=378498356_tduid10147_l_hitoinubanashi16_123_412lo.jpg

Somehow, I both do and don't want to see the next part, if there's a sequel...
Pros: REVENGE! Plus maybe the good kind of femdom that doesn't involves inanimate objects going places they don't belong.
Cons: The kind of femdom where inanimate objects go places they don't belong.

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I hope the other one too get translated.
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First, to correct Demonlogan, there is no femdom here. The one in the dog suit in the girl, the dom is a guy.

Second, the translation is really good considering the fact that almost half the dialogue is nothing more than gagged sounds, moaning and barking.

Third, the fonts and grammar are bland but thats not a bad thing. Theres only so much you can do before it starts to detract.

Edit: Wow, negative score for leaving feedback as requested by the translator.

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@imercenary Demonlogan is talking about the possible content of a sequel to this manga (he doesn't like pegging/prostate stimulation/things up a dudes butt/ergo butt plug tails on dudes [I enjoy killing subtlety]), which may be why you got voted down instead of somebody explaining this misunderstanding. Or they just don't agree with your feedback and don't want to post feedback/disagree with you via text.

@shadow_moon Thanks for the translation. I appreciate the notes at the end to explain the areas of uncertainty. I thought you did a good job. I understood everything and there are just little problems: to just go over page 11 & 17 with you. On 17, it should be awakened, with an "ed" on the end (past tense). The final bubble on 17 would be better if it was "a pet for a whole day too" instead of "the pet" (she's being coy - "a pet" could be any pet, but it's obviously him from the drawing). Also worth saying, in the flow of this manga he has not been a pet, so referring to him as "the pet" in that sentence structure doesn't make as much sense. On 11, the folklore speech, you just need to put until or till (same word, but till is more casual, like "From Dusk Till Dawn" the film) before "the hero" so, "wait until the hero". Also, "find" needs to be "finds". As I said, very small problems. You did good.

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Sweet revenge~

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for a second there, judging on the title image, I thought there would be gore involved. Thank god it isn't, as S&M plays make great doujins without it. Personally I can't wait for a sequel regardless of foreign objects going to a male's safety zone or not, it's still a kinky idea.

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There will not be a sequel to this one anytime soon. Shinoshinos new doujin has completely different characters and a yuri femdom theme.

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I believe that page 10 is making a reference to Dragon Quest 2. In order to break the curse placed upon the princess of Moonbrooke, which turned her into a dog, you have to find the Mirror of Ra in a swamp and use it to reveal her true form.

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That was hardcore!!!!

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Too hardcore for me, hope others enjoy it though.

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Holycow, a segment of human centipede!

Anyway, it's blissful to not seeing any dismembered girl here.

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The Lens of Truth comment on page 11 here is a reference to the item from Zelda: Ocarina of Time. And the Hero being referenced is, logically, Link. http://zelda.wikia.com/wiki/Lens_of_Truth

The concept of changing a female dog back to human is a Dragon Quest 2 reference, so the artist is referring to two games with one line.

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Well, you ended up chopping page 17 now...

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God damn it! Well...don't know if I should re-update now or wait longer because I've already bumped this gallery twice now and don't want people thinking that I'm spam bumping this...
Will see what I'll do about it.

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Not bad, but definitely could have gone into the process of domestication much much more. Some wasted potential.

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I think she might be saying (in English) "Son of a bitch... hahahaha" in Panel 5.

Ten years and a lot of Japanese later, I've changed my mind -- it's probably something like

"Sonna <???> <???>wanai wa yo..."

which would translate to something like "You didn't need to <verb> some <category>..."

I can't make it out completely either, but it's probably something in the general form of "you didn't need to go this far" or "you didn't need to make up an excuse"

Last edited on 13 October 2023, 05:36.

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