I annouce I quit hentai.I don't care 1star or 5star,it doesn't do anything to my life. hentai is so bad,I go deeper and deeper. This account is deleted.

Hehehe i think it's funny where a chapter 1 you stated actually a final chapter for this story.

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Google Translate is not a reliable way to translate Japanese. For example (and this is just one of many), on page 15, the father blows up about being called dad despite never being called one. Google translates Shuu's line "いやあのおと" as "Sound that bad" which is presumably where you got "Sounds bad..." from. The line should be translated as something like "No, you see dad-", which explains where his outburst came from. At a glance, there's still a ton of inexplicably untranslated stuff; even some of the "translated" text is still in Japanese (e.g. "yamete" on page 19). Also, why is it still out of order? The bad editing and spelling is forgivable, but the translation (and lack thereof) is not.

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You may now kiss the dick.

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I have finally found a level worse than CGRascal. This would make more sense if left as the original Japanese.

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>I decide to fix this very girly manga just for people who love soft and pure love genre.

Fix, you say? Nope, still reads like shit. You've fixed nothing.

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Negative five for trying.

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lol, surprised to see this one. i love kuon michiyoshi art so i already read the original. The prologue is only 3 pages, wonder why it didnt start from that instead of the final chapter.

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>lol the previous version got 124 1star for no reason.

There IS a reason why. Clearly you do not get it.

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Kuon Michiyoshi is an awesome mangaka
...This just insults his good works at your attempt to poorly translate
Quit attempting any translation and leave it to the "professionals"

Base +17, BlickWinkel +9, altereggo -22, Droyer +4, Maximum_Joe +34, blunt005 +8

Can someone just pick this up already, instead of someone who rely on Google Translate.

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They had sex 300 times in a week!?

If they're up for 16 hours a day and do it every day all day, they'd have sex 2.68 times an hour.

Some men have endurance, but that's just absurd even for porn.

Also, this is way too good of a story for a crummy translation.

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This translation was so bad that it would have broken the suckmeter if it wasn't already broken.

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REJOICE!

He has been run off!

Now if we could only remove Goatse from the site.

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