Good news, for those who don't like my translation, you can buy offical translation of this manga from ProjectH for $12, who is translating Velvet Kiss.
This is fan translation and decensor for personal use, it has no means to be commercially competitive.
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BTW, Kuon Michiyoshi is female!

When I translate do esper asami it was always 2 star. I still finish it, I don't do commission, I do what I like.
Some fixes, I just feel kinda sorry, this is such a good manga, there are soooo many ntr out there, I fap so much on it. Anyway I got other stuff to do

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Shits about to get NTR

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Go away, you suck.

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At least, the uploader did some effort. Now, those like Yossarian are haters. Let them hate all they want until they get bored.

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This is the third time you've posted this, and you've changed nothing. You're getting voted down to 1 star because you put 0 effort into actually translating this, or editing it into readable English. Like I said on your previous "version": This would make more sense if left as the original Japanese.

Oh, and I thought you said you quit? We were all quite happy with that decision...

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Now let me translate the meaning of your words to those who read this. You are saying that because you are doing this for free so others should better (shut their trap and) accept this as a gift from a upper man.

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>Her meat wall is getting loosened.

WTF dude. Who thought that would be a good translation?

Poor guy, his father-in-law made him impotent.

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>Hime's place is kawaii na and pink

That about sums up this translation. Fucking glorious.

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pic 19 with yamete word :v it make me cant stop laughing lol hahaha thanks

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