this is one of those stories that annoys me...you could easily have the character start off female with the exact same result, you'd just need to rewrite two or three lines of dialog.
Base +8, fine17 -7, pedoune -7, demongirl23 -6, Lesamuen +9
It was a pretty good transformation sequence up until the last couple of pages. I really didn't need to see the kid, after being transformed into a robot (yet still pretty much underage girl) become molested and than sexually engaged with her adult employer. IDK just seemed unnecessarily vulgar to me and just sort of thrown in for no reason other than 'LOL your a girl and robot now serve master get fucked and down on your knees now!' Normally I don't even mind that sort of thing if the intention set out early but the way it was tact on in the end was a downer.