This is a good one. The nicely drawn detail from the foreplay till the end showed various expressions that makes Nene more love-able and sexier is wonderful. Rather than going for ahego like most, it is refreshing to see a vanilla this well done. If only the group/author did original works, I'm sure it would be closer to Homunculus. The only down side is that this work is too short.
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