this is my first try to make a comic and Some sketches made by me [OppaiGuru] need some rants, motivation tell me if it sucks ur wut haha, i accept all comments thanks. and i know the argument of the story really sucks was just testing out how to add bubbles and frames Xd.
*update 01: Added 3 more sketches i had around and one i painted using Paint in my free time haha.

not bad the word balloons could be in better positions

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You're WORLDS better than most artists who try to start out here. Keep up the good work, practice constantly, try to learn different techniques on drawing and shading, and try not to lose your artistic spark. Besides all of that, just keep at it, you already have a good eye and some already evident skill, so try to keep it up and you'll be fine.

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A bit of sameface on the girls but then again...most professional hentai artist do that time to time

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wow nice manga , keep it up

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thanks all for ur comment, and yes i will keep it up i know i need to improve a lot more and way to do it is the practice , thanks!

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good job i love it all,keep up the great work.

Base +3, Moku +10

Anatomy is pretty well done, Love how the females are drawn very well in the essence of mature women oozing beauty.

Class 1 milfs! really cant wait to seem more of your work in the future!

Base +8, Moku +10

need different pose to draw.nice try

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