my second short comic attempt , hope u all like it, for some reason my early works gallery got deleted well i guess wasnt that good lol, as always all comments are welcome thanks!.

update note 1: well iv trying really hard to make plot around, i know its an old one but damn was funny to try t make it happen.
side note: this is first time i work around a plot, i must say,trying to make your own story is a total learning experience and also a good way to increase your skills on the process, as always comments goods or bad are welcome, and thanks for taking a minute to check it, i know is not the most epic art but i hope to get better , thanks!.

Not bad art, but unsatisfying. Try putting a story together before posting.

Base +6, Dustfinger +10

yes thanks, well im very bad at writing stories, but i will try my best :D.
@maskedfapper, yeah im working u know im not a pro lol, and what u mean by flonder-face?

Base +1, Kenyenzie +8, Limited +9

Think about some plots make you turn on then choose one, and don't put anything you like on story, that make you hard to decide where the plot go, save your thought for a next work.

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English version gets near 5 stars

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The aunt seems just a little too casual and nonchalant about being fucked by her nephew. In fact, the nephew seems too casual and nonchalant about fucking his aunt. The art is good, but the plot and feel of the story need improvement.

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Work on anatomy. His hand in one the second page looks awful, for example. Also, stop with the flounder-face.

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really loved the art! keep it up :)

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