Written by Kyonko802 http://pastebin.com/AN75D2Sw Illustrated by dj-black-n-white http://dj-black-n-white.deviantart.com/

This is the first human x pony comic I've seen. It's a strange feeling that it is taken so seriously. I like it, but I wish the art didn't get sketchy once the action started. I'd rather have bad 'story art' and decent 'adult art' than the other way around.

P.S. Page 07: Fahrenheit is apparently preferred in Equestria.

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WTF

When did someone draw this?

The added porn part was kinda weird, but everything else... man.

Thank you for posting this, maybe I should go back to AiE.

Hmm.

Edit: Oh and for reference, my story ended on page 20. It might be part of the reason the second part looks so sketchy. The artist probably just whipped it up when people asked for it.

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Aaaand i was wondering when would riding starts. Storyboard is amazing. Still makes me wonder why porn staff is half-assed...

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Last edited on 24 March 2024, 18:42.

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So, I read this, I go to the bathroom to take a piss, look at the mirror, and notice a happy smile on my face. Wow.

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All in all i can be snob in my tasts in hentai and porn... That being said i have to tip my hat and maybe my dick to this art work. Well done great story line. Needs a bit more to complet the world in it. But i see a devloping story coming. Keep up the great work,Im waiting with baited breath and hard dick to read future comixs.

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I came for porn...and it certainly was porn...just not the porn I expected...at all...

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I enjoyed this far more then I thought I would. Most my little pony xxx comics are half assed doodles, this however is well thought out even though its not done. "When did I stop hating you?" *giggle*

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Very cute. I'd have liked the sex scene to be more drawn out (get it?), but the beginning build up was very pleasing.

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I've literally read this story awhile back... I never thought I'd see this in porn format.

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I don't clop, but this comic is fucking good. I think my penis jumped a little... Oh good, it's still down.

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I guess this is how my story would look like. Somewhat.

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HOLY SHIT! I REMEMBER THIS STORY!

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Just today I downloaded the series, yet saw not even the first chapter, but I already like hentai, and quite incredibly, I am no fan of the furry, and yet I really liked this, please bring more ...! ! THANK YOU! ^ ^

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Well that's describe mostly bronys dreams...

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Certainly wasn't expecting something good when seeing the title. Glad I was wrong.

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Winking Clitoris. Okay.

This is good. I wish this was the average writing level for fan-porn. Art, as other people said, got sketchy, and the handwriting was a bit hard to read in places, but was still good overall.

I'm kinda wanting to know if there are any other parts to this story. Gonna have to look it up.

@ jaylou1010: Well, My Little Pony is American, a good percentage of the fans are American, and most clocks that display temperature also let you choose which units are displayed.

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I read Anon's dialogue in Steve Blum's voice for some reason... But, it was a beautiful story, and not bad with the added porn part. Wish there was more. ^^

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Very nice writing and enjoyable, if the author and/or artist still reads these posts, I'd encourage both to do more, I'd love to read them.

The writing is sweet and believable, the porn part being good, but not why you come back to read it again.

The added touches of the art, like his Celestia playboy calender, and Lyra staring at him, give it a genuine and connected feel.
Thanks.

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I hope he's gotten better since making this. The composition is goddamn atrocious. This is either the first comic layout he's ever done or one of the first. It screams amateur artist. Also, cartoon horse fantasy. That screams amateur, as well.

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I came to this LOOOOOOOl

I can now honestly-to-God say i've truly crossed the line into madman territory. Drinks on me!

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well done I do enjoy the art form
but if you ask me you didn't really need the sex seen at the end
not that it wasn't good or anything

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