Are really the expressions so bad? I don't think the other 3d authors posting on this site are doing better. Could someone please explain me why they are so horrible, in your opinion?
I don't think the expressions are horrible, I've see far worse, in my opinion they are very well made. The only thing that I didn't like was that the cosplay part was too short... maybe in a next chapter you could do again another cosplay this time with all the girls, Miriam, Simo and Lucia, that would be great.