Not bad... I think this story needs a sequel, maybe just to adjust things between them.
I mean: the guy needs to man up a little, and the girl needs to "evolve", psychologically speaking.

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I think most of the heroine's charm is in her detached personality, really. It sets her apart.

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Damnit, Japan.

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Wording's a bit odd and some of the art is just plain weird.

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Why not just make this yaoi...any guy that's this girlish, and beg's for anal definitely isn't into girls. It'd be more enjoyable that way :)

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Kind of getting some mood whiplash off of this one...

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As awkwardly phrased as parts of the translation was,
"The parts of me that doesn't have enough... you exist to fill up my heart..." still got me Dawww'ing.
Great stuff.

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@Granten:
What did you expect? It's CGrascal, the man who makes r34 of hentai come true. Yes, he rapes hentai. That's how bad he is.

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once again, someone DIDNT GET THE MEMO ON WHAT PEGGING MEANS!

there is no pegging in this comic, just some anal fun . . . but no strapon f**king of the guys ass.

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This translation is not good. This deserves better.

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Page 5: What, seriously? That's what japanese women think of men? Come on, that's ridiculous.

...

-slowly removes panties from head-

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hm...it says Volume 3 where's 2 and 1?

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Wow, I suck at english but I can still see how AWFUL this translation is. It's so painful to reword every sentence to get something understandable.

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Beautifully cool and detached femdom with exquisite expressions, completely ruined by CGrascal's shitty translation making it so that you can't tell what the characters are saying or even who is speaking.

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 7. Translation 3. All out of 10.

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