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[Inuyuru} All I do is dream

Western
Posted:2013-07-17 20:23
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:964.6 KiB
Length:7 pages
Favorited:12 times
Rating:
28
Average: 1.33
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Posted on 17 July 2013, 20:23 by:   Inuyuru    PM
Uploader Comment
Pent up, Knives starts to drift off.
Posted on 17 July 2013, 22:01 by:   Raevenel    PM
Score -1
Garbage. Absolute, total garbage.
Posted on 20 July 2013, 13:19 by:   soretu    PM
Score +21
I'd offer constructive criticism, but there isn't enough content here to build off of. The art looks like it's done in MS Paint, and the 'story' consists of a short dream sequence about some boring, too-short porn. There's no build up, no pay off, and as a result it feels like it was made for no other reason than to show off the characters. Combined with the needless cover and page of pseudo-poetry, the entire thing comes off as an egotistical cry for attention.
It would probably be better off on deviantart than here.
Posted on 23 January 2014, 22:08 by:   Minatowolf    PM
Score +3
Am I the only one that thinks it's actually a pretty good short hentai comic?

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