Ariana's 'language' seems to have gotten a tiny bit better, and I like the story, but that clipping is horrendous. The hair is going through everything, which normally isn't a problem if it's in the 'background', but this obviously swings into the 'foreground' on page 42 <.<. And the 'penis' looks like it's transplanted onto the body from something else...
Edit: I might clarify, the language is better 'relatively', rofl. I can at least understand what was 'meant' to be said....still awful in most regards. Really needs a 'second eye' proof-reader.
@The Goat is Watching, maybe in CG, but I don't think Ariana is worse than Amazeroth was when talking about TG period...XD.