You can see the art improve between the first and last page.

Base +13, Darth2124 +8, lightningchaser +4, SatalinLoveJr +6

What's with tracing The Pit stuff? Come on, give it up already.

Base +6, ZeroKnightmare +7, Qwerty Bam +3, SatalinLoveJr +6

Well this is definitely different dialogue from what I remember, but at least they seem to be in somewhat better order than last time.

Base +10, nww +7, Qwerty Bam +3, SatalinLoveJr +6, muddy_waters -6

Worst dialogue and story ever, but art is nice.

Base +3, elle_nor69 +9, urkle +6, NotDiegoBrando +6

>Spread your ***** seed into white girls.

Can't tell if this comic is racist, or if the artist is just childish.

Base +3, Vermillion612 -10, elle_nor69 -9, Kirikim +9, Spring Heeled +13, MetalicRonny +5, redronnet +6, Qwerty Bam +3, Diablo44555 +9, lightningchaser +4, SatalinLoveJr +6, PregnantWhoreFucker +6, NotDiegoBrando +6

Hobab, again, nothing traced. All original art (no reference used whatsoever).

Base +6

is a great work from this artist

Base +5, NotDiegoBrando -6