Ugh, the name "Ritchuko" bugs me...Rikko or Ritchu/Ricchu woulda worked better.

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If it takes you that long to notice you're being turned into a girl then you're an idiot.

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Talk about going too far, with an vendetta.

eh. i fab'ed .

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I know that his density is a plot device but he's way too dense

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Why Canada? They're the most accepting country there is.
It would have been three times more believable if it was any other country.

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To be fair, if that would've been me I would've been so f***ing happy. Now you might be like "Why?", well let me tell you.
1. I am transgender. That means I'm a male and want to be a female.
2. I really (Then I mean REALLY) love singing and dancing. I don't know why but I have always been passionate about it and really enjoyed it.
3. I am interested in japanese culture somewhat much. This comes from my 2 japanese friends that I've been friends with since kindergarden.
4. My family is relatively poor. I want to support my family but where I live there aren't many jobs and if there are they are mostly for the age 18+ (I'm 17 (Yo I also have to fap get of my back (Doe this is something you really cannot fap to if you ask me) lol).

Though that's just something I wanted to share with you.

Now to the feedback.
1. You made him way WAY to dumb like for real.
2. Some spelling errors here and there
3. (Depending on how realistic you want to make it) Boobs doesn't grow that fast and if you are born a boy, they don't get that big (I've done my research brah)(Thats a D cup or bigger lol).

Ok I just stopped writing and don't know if it's finished or how it looks but I've gtg. Hope you don't hate my comment?

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