This is a translation of "Petit Sœur Control Freak" by Shimotsuki Juugo, from the original French translation by Agydine. It was translated to english by myself; using Google, French Dictionaries, and some friends of mine who speak French. I do not claim ownership over the artwork or story therein, but believed it deserved to be translated for the members of E-Hentai.org.

Cool. Thank you!

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is anyone else having problems downloading this?

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Yes
The download file seem broken

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Well this is unexpected.

Thank you very much for the effort of bringing this to us in English. :)

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Why are people tagging this as a rewrite? A rewrite is someone inventing their own story based on the images. This is a translation. The fact that it is a Japanese > French > English translation doesn't make it a rewrite.

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Well.

French is my native langage and I can say the translation is not very accurate.
Moreover, the french translations from japanese are often bad, if not very bad (I can't check here since I didn't find the original version of this).
So be warned guys, that may be quite different of what is said in japanese.

Here are some help :
p1 : either you let "petitE soeur" in french, either you put "little sister".
p2 : "I was" -> better with something like "I am coming in"
p3 : "would you please..." -> the complete sentence should be "would you please knock the door before entering ?"
p3 : "it's" should be "what is it ?"
p5 : that's not a translation mistake, but "Embarassed" doesn't need a capital letter I think.
p11 : "then what do you think ?" is a real mistake, the meaning of this bubble is more "so, you know...", that's not a question actually.

I will stop there for the moment, but if you are interested I could check the whole thing, it takes time though.

(And don't believe I am saying your work is not well done, I am just trying to help.)

Edit :
Haruko Hackr : you are welcome, thank you anyway. I don't think I will do it again myself, since flashpanty has said that he is going to put his own translation soon.

HGazer : thanks for posting the original, didn't find it. But again, I don't think I will check if the translation of the translation matches with the original.

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almost forgot that I have translate half of this some month ago xD I'll make a second version later on, not a problem, good work though =)

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Thanks MyAnswerIs42 for your reply. Yes, I know the translation is not 100%. Again, the translation loses something between languages. I tried to focus less on the literal translation and more on making the story coherent in English (mainly why I called it a fan edit.) I am glad you are interested in correcting the errors, however this was just something I did out of boredom. I welcome a professional French to English translation; the original french one is still on this site. Thanks again. - H.H.

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Chapter from [Shimotsuki Juugo] MAS HOLic

/s/a28b66befe/588258-154
Imouto Control Freak

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Not a problem with downloading BUT if you're trying to view it and it says "Can't read header" (that's what happened when I tried to view it with Irfanview), you only have to rename the title from Sœur to Soeur. Apparently the problem lies therein, most likely your machine can't read French or something, when I did this I could view them properly.

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best,... sister,... ever,...

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Man, I totally forgot this existed. I found this one for the first time ages ago. Glad to have found it again tho. Covers a lot...

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Just for bookkeeping, this one is based on the magazine release, so the raw can be found here: /g/376370/5d14c4bfe4/
(You can tell based on the art, which is different on the tank release)

Also I'm working on reediting this with an updated translation and using tank scans.

Last edited on 13 June 2020, 02:59.

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