Translation: biribiri
Proofread: Afro Thunda
Commissioned by: celltf
biribiri.eu

thanks for the upload I swear the art nowadays is just usually pretty good and also hmm was she not a virgin? it just feels off to me when a highschool girl has sex with a guy for the first time and she isn't a virgin makes me wonder if she was sleeping around at such a young age, but whatever
Edit:
hmm look at statistics? why look when it's obvious? I'm just saying I find it rather funny because it seems that she isn't the type but apparently she could be sleeping around.

and bggm sometimes it works and sometimes it just feels off is what I was saying and this would be one of those times in my opinion.

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@blood_racer: Many artist don't mention virginity at all (just plain sex without mention of that) or even mention defloration, but don't draw even a drop of blood. I suppose that's their preference.

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@blood racer:

Really? If you look up statistics the average person now a days loses their virginity by high school if not even before. I think sir you need to open your eyes as we're no longer in the stone age.

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Short, cute, sweet. Thanks.

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That was an...odd transition into sex.

"Do I smell bad?"
"Er...yeah."
"OK, let me give you a blowjob."

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@blood raccer
dont the japanese people say something about people in track teams losing their hymen while running?

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I think this is the first time I've seen the girl being the one who smells bad. Usually it's the other way around.

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@flamedance58:

And by average person, do you mean the jocks/dicks that girls are somehow attracted to? Maybe it's just the area I live in, but I know of some people that are still virgins myself included (don't hate, I don't fuck overly traded off pussies), based on the fact of our time in high school it would be the athletic party-goers that would get all the women. Granted barely any of those relationships still exist, and a lot of those girls are now single mothers, it still irks me that no matter how much I try, i'm still a friend in their eyes while they go out and get their heart (and body) broken over and over again.

This generation has created this so called 'Friend Zone' of guys that girls can back up on to be treated nice and with respect, before venturing off again in hopes to find that 0.1% of the socially generated 10 out of 10 'perfect' guy that would actually stay with em, when all along the one in the friend zone which may be near a 6 on a scale of 1-10 would have sufficed all along. Makes my faith for humanity non existent.

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@blood racer: There's a number of ways an artist can spin the 'defloration' feature, and more often than not where it's mentioned (at least, this was the case a few months ago), when the artists do draw blood, maybe more than necessary, there's at least one nut in the comments that'll say "I don't think they actually bleed that much" or that it's "ridiculous/unrealistic that it would actually feel good the first time."

Yeah, I think after a while artists say "screw it" and draw the scene they want to draw. And unless explicitly mentioned /in/ the drop (in other words, a line that basically states she's done it with every other guy in school or the principal or the teachers), or foreshadowed at the end of a 'chapter' (when it says "To Be Continued" at the end after showing some shadowy smiling bastards), or... no, those cover it, don't bother worrying about it unless you want to be called out by people that dislike people that agonize over details like that.

On that note, why are we going over stuff like defloration? The theme of this is scent and sweat, though to be fair there's stuff that would put this to shame in comparison. The guy isn't necessarily a virgin himself, nor does he state that he wants any exclusive relationship, so why the hell was the subject brought up?

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There are many instances where it's not necessary, when we talk about childhood friends it would be preferable to have it. It's not a matter of statistics but of writing things in a certain way, even when writing barebones vanilla one can fall short.

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"The gender of the one that's emitting the smell determines if the tag is placed in the female or male namespace."

Get it right, faggots.

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lol @blood racer & @flamedance58
what an examplary response from public when you say vanilla heroine is not a virgin.
also, the joint between introduction story and sex is so bad and awkward that porn scenarion beat it in complexicity. a guy licks a girl, insults her(from bystanders pov), and gets a hard on, and she stuffs her mouth with his dick in response? C'MON!!! you surely can do better, author! *>_<

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