Warning, diabeetus is approaching!

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Marisa x ... Shanghai? Well... that's... VERY new... and awkward...

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Marisa x Shanghai is still more normal than Reimu x Sanae

@MythagoWoods
It looks like they just did some typesetting on it, made it easier to read

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Wasn't this already uploaded at /g/615356/cf8f559a54/ or are there some changes here I'm not noticing? (aside from the title being Romanji'd)

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I love yohane crack pairings

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Finally a quality version of this has been released. Not only is the typesetting and translation better, the quality of the scan is ways higher.

Marisa x Shanghai, well that is a novel pairing. Sweet as always, as expected of Yohane.

But makes me think, if there is an Ao book of Reimu and Sanae somewhere out there, not to mention Alice and Patchouli.

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Wow!! This is some REAL translation, hope I could reach such level of texting and typesetting in the future. Thanks very much!

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unnecessary translation, the other one was really better. It looks like that was done by someone wanting to reinvent the wheel. I'm not implying that this translation was done for of purposes of spam.

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I don't know. I can't get around the pairing Shanghai. Maybe because she hasn't been given autonomy in the game yet. Or maybe I just feel kinda bad for Marisa that she ends up with a doll. Have to say though, really love the art style

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I normally don't care much about negative feedback, though I do prefer that they come with some useful criticism.
And it's been quite a while by now so I bet nobody will bother reading this but anyway, since I'm around here checking some galleries and this happens to be one of my favorite works I've worked on, I'll take my time to reply.

Yes, this doujinshi was already translated when I decided to translate it.
No I didn't do because I wanted to reinvent the wheel nor wanted to spam (really, who would spend so much only to spam? Are you seriously telling me that there are people stupid enough to do that, Abuelito1?).

And if you really think that this one is worst in any aspect than the other one, or if you really think that this one only "did some typesetting", all I have to say is: read both again and compare. I mean, really. If you say that this one has only minor changes compared to the other, it just shows that you didn't bother reading both AT ALL.

Anyway, for those of you who enjoyed, I wrote a text with some thoughts on this work so, if you'd like, you can read it here:
http://smdc-translations.com/discussion-on-hoshi-utsuro-and-analogy-of-society-and-the-hardships-of-a-relationship/

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Marisa being alone was heartbreaking, but how sweet the end was makes up for it.

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>the all your friends are too busy being lesbians to hang out and have tea

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