Well, I don't know how to start.... it's a Miyabi Tsuzuru Doujin so at this point it's nice, the action is nice the censorShit is tolerable but the translation is really bad, sorry but sometimes it simply don't have sense, besides the doujin was "occidentalized", I mean the pages were turned to be read as an american comic. So sad..... and I don't know what's the point of the last pages, they don't look as an omake, it's more like a ripped pages from somewhere else.

Final Call: It's your choice.

Base +18, arley -6, TheGoodGiggle +3

This doesn't deserve to be called a translation, it is a rewrite.

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http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/book/102870/Adesugata-Shiro-Buta-Hime/

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Los Douins de Naruto son de los mejores. Espero encontrar este material en Sub Spanish mis amigos. Gracias.
I will wait for This in Sub Spanish soon people. I Like it the Doujins of Naruto and the Style of this Artist is Really Good. Thanks.

Last edited on 02 August 2018, 00:52.

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08年的老物。。。

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