A translation of Eromame's excellent first Seiga/Yoshika book. I translated this myself. This is my first upload to e-hentai so please do let me know if there is anything that I can do better. I purposely left Eromame's afterword untranslated because, even when I had the literal translation in front of me, I still couldn't understand what the hell he was on about. For those about to yuri, I salute you. (^o^)/
Check out some scanlation guides (InsideScanlation.com has a nice selection) and try to brush up on some editing basics. It looks like you have a decent handle on Photoshop (although with a careful eye it's not hard to tell where you got bored of clone stamping the sparkly bubbles), but the bad font choices and lack of leveling are pretty jarring here.
Base +11, Shanzenkou +8, Katzius +1, familiarconsequently +12