Tl;dr, but drawn quite ok.

Base +9, happyfauter -7, flamedance58 -10, Seelenmord -10, Hamzeruj18 -7

I actually agree that this is generally quite ok or quite crappy and I would redraw it, if it weren't for the time that I already put into making this. (Also when I worked on this chapter I didn't plan to post it on the net) The drawing keeps getting better with everything new I make, though. And this gallery does contain the beginning of my story and I'd like to actually finish it.

Totterslane67

Edit: @zededd2000: yes, I do, here's a link, I hope you can enter without having to become a member: http://aryion.com/g4/user/Totterslane67

Edit: @Nopozi: good something or bad something?

Edit: @Murgen27: no, just grey pencil. But only the last panel is recently made. The rest is at least a year old. The text and layout is new.

COMIC WAS DISCONTINUED DUE TO:
- LARGE QUALITY DIFFERENCES AMONGST THE DIFFERENT CHAPTERS;
- IT BEING TRADITIONAL ART AND NOT DIGITAL;
- LACK OF TIME TO WORK ON IT;
- THE STORY WAS BECOMING SO BIG IT WOULD TAKE A LIFETIME TO FINISH THE COMIC;
- THIS STORY WOULD WORK BETTER IN THE FORM OF A BOOK.

Last edited on 04 October 2014, 15:29.

Base +6, flamedance58 -10, invalidwords +11, walhalla_rising +6, jinfighter +7, Maximum_Joe +39

I thought it was quite good personally. Far as i'm concerned if people hate it for vore get out and don't rate.

Base +9, starboar -9, flamedance58 -10, invalidwords +11, walhalla_rising +6, Seelenmord -10, Hamzeruj18 +7, Sumegeno +9

Pretty good for a Caucasian person art...

@flamedance58 awwww you got your panties in a knot ? - I bet they draw better then you.... with your stickman art

Base +6, flamedance58 -10, Seelenmord -10, Hamzeruj18 -7, DarkCocoon -6

Keep going. This is quite good, and i wanna see where this is headed.

Base +8, flamedance58 -10, invalidwords +11, walhalla_rising +6, Seelenmord -10, Hamzeruj18 +7, Sumegeno +9

нах такой арт

Base +9, walhalla_rising +6, Seelenmord -10, SeQuest +6, Keytee -6, Linik +8, gurofan63 -10

I think it's pretty good :D just the kind of thing I was looking for.
I'd love to see how far you'd go with it, or how much better you'd get if you continued this as an ongoing thing... do you have a gallery anywhere Totterslane?

Base +9, invalidwords +11, walhalla_rising +6, Seelenmord -10, Sumegeno +9

Well... that was... something.

Base +4

Did... did you use crayons to do this?

Base +4, PregnantWhoreFucker +6