by Zero Identity. All credits go & belong to him/ her, I'm just a person who likes this stuff. Visit zeroidentitycreations.blogspot.com for more of the creator's stuff, he/she's awesome.
oh god how did this get here i am not good with computer
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This is pretty good, Is there any other work by him/her, Cause this is good, It's like a mix of "I am a girl now", "[Date] Subute Wa Boku No Mono", and "Dulce Report"
The dialogue and concept is nice enough, but the narrative itself could use some work. It's like the writer couldn't decide whether to use first- or thrid-person PoV so he/she decided to combine the two. As such, it ends up reading kinda awkwardly.
If the creator sticks with, my opinion, third-person PoV, this could be fucking awesome.
@Sage Windu: I definitely noticed the same, but I also noticed some parts were italicized and most of them seemed to be Steven's thoughts or emphasis. What I figure is that some of those lines weren't italicized and that's what makes it jarring.
All in all, one of those things where I found it too interesting to fap, if only because it's clear the main would kill to be a guy again.