(SC41) [Hatomugi x Genmai (Harurun)] Toki o Wasurete... | Forgotten Time [English] [SMDC]

(サンクリ41) [はとむぎ×げんまい (はるるん)] 時を忘れて… [英訳]

Doujinshi

Posted:	2014-01-02 18:37
Parent:	None
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Language:	English TR
File Size:	10.34 MiB
Length:	12 pages
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Posted on 02 January 2014, 18:37 by: shadow_moon

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Translated and edited by myself.

For DDL check: http://wp.me/p3Iacc-fS

Posted on 02 January 2014, 20:31 by: tkhang

This would be very good, if it has a longer story. Overall, it color and picture is very well done. So thank you very much SMDC translation.

Posted on 02 January 2014, 22:27 by: Shitsuji-kun

The script probably would have benefited from having another pair of eyes look over it. There are a few instances where the language felt jumbled and awkward:

>It would be better that I didn't came... -> It would've been better if I didn't come...
>You want to have sex with, right? -> You want to have sex with me, right?

Just some friendly advice.

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language:	english translated
parody:	original
group:	hatomugi x genmai
artist:	harurun
female:	big breasts bikini sister swimsuit
mixed:	incest
other:	full color