I really liked this one, so I translated it.

Some of the dialog in the original are redundant so I changed them a bit.

"My chest's probably bigger than yours."

Yo shots fired.

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Bloody hell. if he doesn't want the job, I do

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He has ascended beyond what mortal minds can comprehend.

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If you changed some of the dialogue, wouldn't that then make this a rewrite as well as a translation?

content edit:
I retract the above statement because I then thought of two of the http://ehwiki.org/wiki/Gallery_Tagging tagging rules.
* In general, do NOT tag something unless it has a fair amount of presence in a gallery. Anything found in only 1-2 images should almost never be tagged.
* Do Not Use a language tag on an imageset gallery unless a vast majority of it (75%+) contains text in that language.

So regardless of if the changes were for clarity in terms of language differences (which I fully understand and accept, Virgazone's explanation of what was changed is excellent) my question still would have previously been if a gallery can be both translated and rewritten. Unless it is at least 25% or the other, then no, it couldn't.

If you downvoters would kindly remove your downvotes, that would be appreciated, as I was not trolling, I was going for a genuine content discussion.

edits prior to content edit:
@Virgazone
Don't get me wrong, I liked it and it seemed natural, I'm just going by the pure tag definition from the wiki.
Description: Someone has filled in their own text either in place of the original text or where there was no text.
From that, to me removing redundant dialogue would be like filling in areas where there was no text.

@ surted, hike22, and Xavier blitz, and anyone else who wants to mod me down.
Please tell me WHY my interpretation is wrong, given other precedence if possible. I'm not being negative about the translation, I genuinely want to know. Negative down votes shouldn't simply be 'I disagree'

@surted
Thanks for the extra post, looked around in Vigalante, but didn't realize the use of the Tower of Babel thread. I ended up asking in General Site Discussion and received a note from Maximum_Joe about pushing up the idea of clarification.

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@Ashley Borkman
Changes I made are simply to make sure characters aren't repeating after themselves, and to make the dialogue flow smoother. In other words, a slightly more liberal translation. Rest assured the original story is delivered to you as Nishino Eichi intended :)

edit:
I guess I'll clarify since there's some confusion. When I say "change" I mean stuff like /s/0d5049d712/274869-7
Note the bottom left bubble. The "translated-better" version and the "translated" version both express the same basic meaning. But one implies the monster is to talking to itself, the other implies the monster is talking to the captured women. This is the extent of the change, everything line of dialog is a translation, some of the more awkward translations I just make more liberal (aka "change").

For example, page 1 bottom half of bubble 2 is expressing the same idea as page 2 bubble 2. Key word is 不満 on page 1 and 気に入らない on page 2. Both can be translated to "unsatisfied" or "don't like" but the meaning delivered by the two are so similar it feels weird to read it on sequential pages. I decided to make page 2 express the idea by its reverse: she doesn't know why the the men reject her → she doesn't know why the men reject her because she thinks she is flawless → she believes she is flawless.

Sorry if there was any confusion ><

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hahahaha, that just how how people are, you step on their pride alittle and you can get them to do anything, lol.

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this guy skoomed so much he chim'd, lol binglo you are quite a faggot, I see

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The message behind this is too deep.

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PORN BUDHA

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@Ashley Borkman
https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?s=&showtopic=99585&view=findpost&p=3081758
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It's a translation. What he meant by "Some of the dialog in the original are redundant so I changed them a bit." was that some lines weren't translated in a completely literal manner (and frankly, I believe a good translation shouldn't be excessively literal).

For example, I noticed that he tweaked a part on page 2:
Girl originally says "美し過ぎるのがダメなの!? この私が美少女過ぎるのが!" which was condensed to "Is it because I'm too beautiful?"
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- freudia

Sorry thought uploaders post already cleared things up
btw always ask here for gallery related stuff; those guys know everything ;)

@CDub7888
do you mean saying that you prefer anime girls over real ones will get you laid? :P

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[teardrop crotch censorship] wow, that's different. I'm forced to say it's oddly creative.

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He is the incarnation of all our spirits

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what a fucking magical dude holy shit he's my hero

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Page 6 sums up everything wrong with the japanese today.

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Holy hell; this dude knows what's up. I only hope I can one day reach the same amount of enlightenment he has...

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The Manga was awe inspiring, the comments were hilarious, and I must thank Virgazone for this most excellent share that is going straight to my favorites list.

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Sequel! SEQUEL!!!

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"You don't have to deal with any commitments after masturbating" <-- Yeah! My feels exactly :D

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upload here!!!!!!!!!!!
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Serves you right you cheeky ojou-chan! *oink*

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He is our one true ideal, the man we all aspire to be.

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Wow, talk about self-respect! This guy is awesome!

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If the fat ugly guy isn't raping and breaking her, then it just becomes shameless.

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Livin the dream.

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Good Story

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这是个假的肥宅

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