It's worth noting a few things: 1) No, this is not out of order. I double checked this on the original artist's page, and that is the correct order of the images. 9 is her last sight of daylight, 10 is her in the bulb but not yet "Swallowed", and 11 is her in the plant's "stomach"
2) The text was written by the original author, but originally placed in the comments section rather than on the image file itself. I dunno if it was the uploader, or someone else, but it appears to be a third party adding that info in for us. Thanks for that, by the way.
3) Worth noting in of itself, the test is VERBATIM (including typos and bad grammar) from the original author, at least for the couple of them I bothered to compare split screen.
4) This artist primarily posts on Deviantart for anyone who wants to follow him(?) there. (username is as the artist credit, above: suddenattackfhm)