This is quite interesting, let's see how chapter 2 will fare....

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Points for creative censoring. Points off for censoring.

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I am so happy that this is finally in English, thanks.

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So uh, what's the deal with that task bar segment at the center-bottom of every page? I know it's not part of mine.

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This is one of those stories where I actually hope the protagonist turns back into a guy and kicks everyone's ass

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@smok3dcheese I think the raw upload had the same thing, and one of the comments there asked if everything was put together through some PDF or something similar. I don't think there was an answer given, but I think it's fair game to say that's how it came together.

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I hate when they don't show how the boy look before. Part of the fun is to SEE the transformation.

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At first I was kind of annoyed that the protagonist was getting so abused, but then I began to realize he's actually just really ignorant and/or stupid and/or socially retarded.

Sooo... all's fair in love and war?

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