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[DragonessLife] The Lost Golden Staff of The Dragon Queen

Western
Posted:2014-03-14 17:31
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:112.2 MiB
Length:80 pages
Favorited:224 times
Rating:
141
Average: 2.83

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Posted on 17 March 2014, 20:45 by:   catsithx    PM
Score +46
ok that was weird some good art but really weird story.
Posted on 17 March 2014, 19:02 by:   GnosticCypher    PM
Score +63
FEAR HER. FOR SHE IS THE DEVOURER OF MEN, THE DESTROYER OF NATIONS. HER TOOTH-FILLED MAW NEVER CEASES TO HUNGER FOR THE FLESH OF MEN. SHE IS...Brooke.
Posted on 17 March 2014, 19:05 by:   emarosa    PM
Score +50
Man there were some serious line skips in this story.

"LET ME OUT!!!" which turns into "I could fall in love with your feet."

Did I miss something?
Posted on 17 March 2014, 19:58 by:   latency    PM
Score +24
This comic is weird. The artist actually does some beautiful textures/shading (e.g. pages 7, 17), although some things like the faces look really weird (e.g. page 2, -"Oh no!"). I think this artist will produce some truly magnificent art if they keep practicing.

It's too bad the author is also a fucking nutter with the writing skills of a first-grader. Oh those people next to me just got crushed into blood and guts? That doesn't mortify me at all, because I'm busy bathing in the glory of a giantess foot.

The artist/author also sucks with perspective at times. In panel 2 it looks like the lizard people are roughly the same size as the protagonist. Then in panel 3 it starts off saying he rubs their feet, cooks their food, cleans their place, so you'd imagine him being roughly the same size as them. Then they're so fucking gigantic that the idea of them even noticing him rubbing their feet, or cleaning anything of theirs, or cooking their gigantic meals (when they clearly eat people) is positively absurd.
Posted on 17 March 2014, 23:53 by:   Unyltyan    PM
Score +6
The point is... Friends are very important.
Posted on 18 March 2014, 00:45 by:   striker2s    PM
Score +116
The English is weird because the artist/author is deaf, and his understanding of how English is used is different as he writes in a manner similar to how signing is done.
Posted on 18 March 2014, 04:52 by:   Lolimaster    PM
Score +8
Nice story. Maybe more adventures with Brooke.
Posted on 18 March 2014, 18:55 by:   ArchAngelrc    PM
Score +12
Good art, kinda weird story, no sex.

Meh
Posted on 19 March 2014, 22:57 by:   Gradient    PM
Score +21
Is being deaf really an excuse? He's deaf, not blind or illiterate.
Posted on 27 March 2014, 08:13 by:   Shas000    PM
Score +5
Holy Christ that was bad writing it was a really gory bad children tale
Posted on 29 May 2014, 07:06 by:   manzhao    PM
Score +24
I went through 80 pages of awful writing to discover that there is no nudity or sex...ultra-lame.
Posted on 02 October 2014, 20:50 by:   Anosplicer    PM
Score -5
Man, you know what's really pathetic about all this? All these negros in the comments whining and bitching the writing is awful and the art is bad.
Well, to be honest, I'm sure it's much fucking better then whatever autistic macaroni horse shit you faggots can "draw"
Posted on 17 January 2021, 03:11 by:   D72    PM
Score +3
The artwok is fine, but the dialogue could use some polishing.

striker2s makes a good point though about the singing, so it's not as bad.
Posted on 30 January 2021, 21:53 by:   HaruGrad    PM
Score +6
Great artwork in terms of the used style, though some facial expressions are indeed weird.
The writing, as mentioned in other comments is quite rough but all in all the meaning is properly conveyed and it doesn't influence the reading experience too much. There is also the fact about the artists' background, mentioned by striker2.
The story progresses very quickly and some parts feel forced for the sake of progress. Then again, this is an 80-page piece, fully colored as well and that is more than thee every work you can see here.
Personal respect for touching more exotic topics and fetishes and showing these in a broad variety as well as excluding sex scenes. A brave decision that worked well for the whole story.

All in all, considering the topics and style the artist is going for, a great piece of work. 8.5 out of 10 from me.

P.S.: For all the people wondering about missing sex scenes. For future works you might consider checking the tags, those will normally tell you pretty good what to expect or not.

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