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Edit-03/15/14 - Added chapter 5. I don't think I'll do anymore chapters from this tank, as the rest don't really interest me as much as this first storyline.

Edit 03/14/14 - Added chapters 2-4. I also reworked some of the dialogue in chapter 1 to hopefully seem more natural.

My first attempt at translating something.
I'll be honest, I don't know that much Japanese and I just did this to see if it was possible to translate something by faking my way with heavy dictionary use.
I'm pretty satisfied with the result though.
I was considering not posting it, but here it is.
I know the typesetting sucks, but whatever.

I really enjoy this story even if the art isn't amazing.

This typesetting and vacation theme remind me of the flash game 'Frank's adventure' series.

Base +21, Air Rider +9, yellow-chan +5, Ashi17 +8, Chimpzy +9, Beane +7

It's a good first effort, main advice I'd give is trying to make the dialog flow more like a natural conversation. Basically try to make the dialog feel like it's people actually talking to each other IRL. Japanese grammar is different from English, so try more to get the meaning of the words across, rather than their specific order.

Base +6, colossol +11, yellow-chan +5, Visadio +14, Anonyslime +7, MechWarriorNY +6, Ashi17 +8, RareTracks +14, Chimpzy +9, manthis8 +5, Ooe Kintarou +3

very sweet, awkward sex is the best sex!

Base +1, Ashi17 +8, Chimpzy +9, Ooe Kintarou +3

Saw the NTR tag and got scared for a moment cause I like this tank.

Base +5, belxebu -7, op34 +3

"Chiaki sucks up all my semen and when I'm out, she gets the rest of her fill by cheating on me."

"Don't hold back, I know that you and Chiaki have done it before."

Also gets his kouhai's girlfriend wet and ready for the kouhai.

Wow, sempai is as chill as fuck.

Base +5, Ashi17 +8, Chimpzy +9, rising11 +6, ntwst +7, fillin +5, JigokuRori +4, manthis8 +5, Yowazzupmynig +6, Beane +7, Azura Meta +6

what a bunch of shit

Base +1, Guestoid -7, captcarisma -14, Ser Maggot -7, Ashi17 -8, Morgoth666 -7, stupid army -6, Beane -7, sirskyrider -3, Chamma -7, MelmothTheWanderer -30, worm148 -7

FUUUUUCK! Sir, you deserve a gold medal, or your entire team does! Okamoto Fujio works are brilliant and they need more love, and I commend you for your work! Thank you for eternity!

Base +8, Ser Maggot +7, ENHfaithful +8, Ashi17 +8, riwamixer99 +7, stupid army +6, MelmothTheWanderer +33

well then....swimming

Base +2, Chimpzy +9, Durlag +9

Just saw the raws, is the girl in chapter 6 the same girl in the first 5 chapter? because they look almost identical lol

Base +3, belxebu +7

"I don't mind"

Spitake moment right there.

Base +5

Chapter 1-5, page 101

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