Don't know who translated or if it's actually translated and not just rewritten. Th english is a bit flawed for sure, but here you go!

I think this is way more than "a bit flawed"...

Base +7, GuroLover12 -7, Luke78 +9

artistic error on page 32 lets see who finds it.. ^_^

Base +7, oneiwonder +5

Apparently it's considered legal in Equestria to touch each others' junk without asking for consent first. That seems like a severe societal flaw in a clothing optional society.

Base +20, GuroLover12 -7, krim1 +6, Seiphied +6, White Joker +7, jacobV +3, oneiwonder +5, kitsunefox21 +6, Gorm +6, narach +7, Qwertius +16

Next time, don't let a 12 year old write and typeset this, okay?

Base +6, 20200 -26

Im guessing page 32 would be a cutie-mark transfer. And while I liked the art, the English was "slightly" rough. Got the just of it though, thanks. I'm glad Japan is on the clop wagon now.

Base +6, keissenmind +6

It's translated correctly, to a degree...But the typesetting needs to be better than MSPaint, lol. I don't watch MLP, but I like Dogear enough to be interested in this. Would people be like it if I were to redo the typesetting? (But I would need to get the permission from the original translator first, since I'll just use his/her script. With all those "Anypony" andwhatnot included)

Base +6

Since when did Applejack have Rainbow Dash's cutie mark.

Since this is futa/dick growth, why is this tagged yuri/girls only?

Base +2, PervertedCrow +6

Things went all Magical Mystery Cure on Applejack's cutey mark. Good eye iambob.

Base +7, oneiwonder +5

I have one issue with the story in this. ... poison joke, as per the name JOKE plays pranks on the individual that touches it. The only reason it would grow you a dick is if some how that would be a prank, which is clearly isn't, or if it is it's so low brow for a magical plant like that. I say this because the only possible thing I see would be it appearing on somepony that values femininity (like Rarity) and a big stallion bit just ruins their day. It makes little sense for AJ in context of what the flower is actually supposed to do. Other than that, not bad. Always good to have more Doujin clop.

Base +17, Vessaile -5

This was really good however, the characters are a bit off. RD would be more accepting and I don't think AJ would be so aggressive, but it just might be more of a fetish doujin rather than character accuracy.

Base +7

Proper version out:
http://www.littlewhitebutterflies.net/1716-dogear-inumimi-moeta-rainbow-green-apple-mlp/

/g/693623/1d80940c24/

Base +16, cm4000 +6