tl/edit almond EDIT: seems to be a hiccup for 16.jpg thumbnail. fullsize works fine, though.

So yesterday I got up and realized I had nothing to release for april fools.
No ponies. No dolphinfucks. No child-raping mind-breaking slut-making tales of woe.

But then an idea came to me. Why don't I just release something with no qc, and let the readers do it for me?

So here it is. I'll pick a commentator at random and translate something for them, maybe?

TERMS AND CONDITIONS
No purchase necessary to enter or win. Odds of winning will depend on the total number of entries received. Void where prohibited by law.
1. Elegibility: Almond's impromptu contest ("the Deathrace") is open only to natural persons who are residents and legally located on Planet Earth, in proximity to Sol, in the Milky Way. Employees of Little White Butterflies and each of their respective parent companies, affiliates, subsidiaries, advertising, promotion, and fulfillment agencies, directors, and officers, and each of their immediate family members and persons living in their same household (whether legally related or not), are not eligible to participate in the Deathrace or win a prize.

2. PRIZES: One (1) Grand Prize winner will receive one (1) imaginary ticket, which can be turned in for one (1) book to be considered by almond ("the nutty") for translation. The nutty is not legally obligated to fulfill this request. To increase the likelihood of the request being accepted, limit page length to under thirty (30) pages and mean word density to under forty (40) characters per page.

Innumerable (∞) non-winners will receive non-voting shares of the nutty's soul.

4. SELECTION OF WINNERS: Winners will be selected via pseudo-random algorithm by a human processor. ("eeny-meeny-miny-moe")

5. WINNER NOTIFICATION: All potential winners will be notified via e-hentai's personal messaging system.

The expressions are awesome on this.

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Mmm! Such a nicely well drawn work! I think top left panel, page 11 is probably the best shot, though!

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You should mark '(English)' in the title.

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seems pretty good overall.

words in second bubble on pg10 pops out a little bit, but given the line, it's probably ok.

pg17 is the only real concern, with "Lets go all night?" even if the original line was a question, it just doesn't feel quite right in English.

really enjoyable doujin though.

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Andou Shuuki is god tier, and his Hibiki works in particular are fantastic. Thanks for the up, and I hope to see more Werk doujins translated (hint hint Oshigoto After 8)

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You are the april fool!
Nice work by the way

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Looks pretty good me, I'm not much of a qc expert, so all this stuff is just nitpicking and most likely wrong anyway:

pg6 "I'm getting hard" No punctuation at the end.

pg7 Maybe put the "Of course" text a little higher, closer to the white part?
"If you don't show me, I won't get it." like this perhaps? With the comma in the middle?

pg12 "It's spreading in my mouth." Maybe, "It's filling my mouth." would sound better? Probably not though.

pg13 A missing "Nn~" at the end?

pg14 "Your rock hard cock's" I know it's the same thing but maybe "Your rock hard cock is" would sound better?
"nhaa! this feels so good!" No capitalization?

pg16 "Producer, you idiot!" maybe?

pg17 "Let's go all night long." or "Wanna go all night long?" if it was a question.
And I was thinking maybe "I'll make you forget all about it!".

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I had this doujin translated ages ago and my TL had quite a few things worded differently.

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hibiki da best

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Andou Shuuki draws an amazing Hibiki, and those expressions are just meltable.

We're one step closer to getting all his works uploaded and translated here!

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I see nothing that needs correcting. Just a couple points...

03.jpg, right margin 2nd note: looks like it's "are you going to show your telemark?" instead of "turn". Doesn't make any more sense, though, unless in the one of showing off one's skiing prowess... Nonetheless I'd at least put it in the second person, in order to match the other bubbles.

18.jpg 1st panel 3rd bubble: "PRODUCER! ♡♡" is left untranslated. Is it on purpose because it would require setting the text vertically?

Regarding the note, if the pudding is a crème caramel the bottom is indeed the tastiest part since all the caramel collects there... ;)

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Fantastic choice of material, thanks for kindly uploading this baby.

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I want to smell Hibiki.

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So hard to find decent hair nowadays...

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need reseed pls ty

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