Just a rewrite, still I hope you'll enjoy !

I'm sorry, I didn't do the bonus part, but... The art wasn't that great, I only liked the first part.
Hoping you like it !

Edit:
@madow494:
Aren't you the selfish one ? I'm not paid for my translations and I do it during my free time, I almost got more than 40 ongoing project and not enough time to do so.

So yeah, I choose to translate only part 1 because edit part 2 (the bonus) is a hell and I hate the charadesign : too much work for something I don't like, I'd rather use this time for my others project. Translation is something I enjoy to do, it shouldn't become a chore just because haters like you want to fap with it. If you want it done, just post a bounty or commission it, I'm not your maid or anything else so I don't have to comply with your will. All right ?

Edit 2 :
Oh my... Don't say lazy, I'm doing studies to become ingenior so no, I don't have many free time and still I keep translating my others projects so don't say I'm lazy just because I chose which ones I want to do.
If you want something so badly, stop criticize and work for it ! I learned by myself because I wanted to read my fav RAW in english and that's all !

Oh, and just watch the petition to rename, I changed the name 3 days after uploading the gallery, but it was too late and it'll only keep the name chosen by 117% so I can't do anything for this...

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Only thing better is a triple Lucy...

Thanks

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I wish it had the triple lucy bit but I am definitely happy to have atleast this bit translated!

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Yup, same thing as Zolty, but you should precise in the title that this is incomplete or the first part was translated only.

EDIT :
I agree with Zexar.
I checked the RAW and noticed that the translation is not accurate.

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where is part 2

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@mariesmns

That's rather a pity seeing as the "bonus" part is roughly a third of the doujin. Still, part of it's better than none of it translated, so thank you.

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Actually, I disagree. 4 lucys are better. Original, Gemini, Edolas and Future.

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Uh.. don't kill the messenger, but after being confused by the line on page 12 where Edo-Lucy is talking to Earthland-Lucy about licking her (Because when did that happen?) I compared this against the raws.

They uh.. don't match up very well. My Japanese is far from perfect, but even I can spot some obvious differences. She doesn't say anything about licking Lucy or Gemini/Natsu. It's something like "It seems waiting for the penis you hoped for is unbearable? It's getting really wet there." This goes past localization, or changing the wording to sound more natural in English while retaining the original meaning. This is basically a rewrite.

Other examples: Page 5
This version: I'm just giving him a blowjob.
Original: Alright! [It] rose up!

Lucy at the bottom right:
This version: Just what kind of relationship do you have!?
Original: That's not the problem here!

Page 16:
This: Your dick is pounding against my pussy!
Original: This feeling! [It's been a] long time!

And then on Pages 19 and 20 they turned wordless or heavily slurred moaning/screaming into completely original dialog. You get the idea.

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I'm just glad there's at least some Fairy Tail that doesn't involve rape or massive mindbreak. +1

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Too bad, it's rewrite and there isn't part 2

Still a nice job...

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@mariesmns so you're able to translate japanese reasonably well and edit it reasonable well but you won't translate part 2 and the bonus just because you didn't like it, really? very few translators are translating the fairy tail doujinshis as it is and now we get one who can but won't just because he didn't like it? well aren't you just selfish, have you even considered for a minute that other people like it and want to see it translated? if i could translate it i would but i can't with translators like this it makes me wonder if we'll ever see all the doujinshis translated.

Edit: no it still makes you look lazy and the hater for not liking part 2 the character designs are practically the same as part 1 there's little difference and like i said many people did like part 2 and would like to see you translate it and no you don't have to comply but it makes you look lazy.
at least rename this as part 1 as again others would like you do that.
i don't hate you i just wish you would of either of uploaded this with the title part 1 because many people expected both parts when they clicked on your translation or just translated part 2 and seeing as you won't translate it just a simple rename will fix it.

edit 2: you know some people can spend their entire life trying to learn one language and never understand it no matter how much effort they put into it same with computer editing. you have both skills and won't use them thats why i call you lazy i hate it when people can actually do something but don't just because they don't like or enjoy it, life isn't always about doing what you like its about doing what you can with your skills, but its great that you are studying hard for everything. could you at least post like a written translation for part 2 then in your reply? that won't take nearly half as long.
ah yeah i see the rename is out of your control i posted a new name hopefully people will vote for it.

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Lucy does not need anyone she already has a celestial harem of lovers any time she wants them.

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Proper TL: /g/729598/3c89136fb0/

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