Been a long time coming. Was busy with life in general, so sorry for the delay.

A follow up to my second translation work presenting Carn's Joukyou Nightmare

Made edit to the first three chapters and translated the rest for your reading pleasure.

And yeah, it's not trolling, it really took the bitch 80 pages to realize she was being screwed.

Please don't leave us Carn, ever.

You're welcome kiddies.

Feel free to hurl toxic below

Carn should die

@EdoubleT
Because I think I saw the raws read until 3.5 and just couldnt stop myself from ending the story, but the plot is so damn moronic, she had as much wine as her bf so she would be fast asleep too, also alcohol would actually lessen the effect of any sleeping drug why else shouldnt you take alcohol with any drug?!!

@black_cat1
If you like NTR introduce me to your mother, sister, gf, aunt, if i find them attractive ill NTR them away from you must give you the kick of your live after which i will leave them to die since they cant live without my cock anymore then.
Go Die!

How can she be so cruel to marry a guy she has never slept with and is ALREADY Pregnant???????? With (from her point of view) some rapists child (which is already impossible, if thought logically someone had to drug her and no one gave her anything she didnt know, so it must have been someone out of her circle.
She tells her manager and SUDDENLY she reminds him of his wife and cant control himself anymore what bullshit!!!! and she still marries her BF and the guy is not even better, why would he ask her to marry him, knowing that she is pregnant WITHOUT EVER HAVING SEX WITH HIM?????? I DONT THINK HE WOULD ACTUALLY BELIEVE "OH YEAH YOU GOT DRUNK AND WE HAD SEX!" BULLSHIT I SAY!!!
The scenario is not only mind-numbingly stupid its far worse than that only someone with less brain than an ant would find this satisfactory, and anyone who does like it has SERIOUS Issues to address.

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finally. i can enjoy this

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@Battousai124: Why? We need him to bring us more of his NTR work

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@Battousai124
CARN=NTR stop.
WTF u read if u dont like it...

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I hope it will come less censored in a tank...

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is this the complete story?

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Boyfriend will probably find out shes been cheating as soon as he see's she is pregnant because she's to dumb to relies she needs to sleep with him at-least once.

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Sources.
Ch. 1 - COMIC Megastore H 2013-01
Ch. 2 - COMIC Megastore H 2013-05
Ch. 3 - COMIC Megastore H 2013-07
Ch. 3.5 - COMIC Megastore Alpha 2013-10
Ch. 4 (End) - COMIC Megastore Alpha 2013-12

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@Battozsau124 I agree.

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I don't think people would have so much of an issue with NTR if it didn't require one or more of the characters involved to be mind-numbingly stupid in order to flow properly.

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I mean like I never understood why people don't just talk to each other about issues like come ON

Maybe it's just a Japanese society thing I dunno

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Fucking butthurt faggots. Ignore them.

CDub7888: False. And that can also apply to vanilla stories.
They expect happy endings, alpha dude to self-insert, handsome guys, etc.
This is NTR. There are other genres to cover that. Those to please lonely readers.

Exsteverbur got it. People forget from where these things come from and his society issues. Married people who don't talk to each other, job obsession, etc. (Sorry for my English)

Yossarian762 agree with that 100%.

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As I said, first incident wasn't her fault. Every time after that though? Bitch be dumb.

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@CDub, Vanilla is often plotted far more idiotically then NTR. So no, its not about a character being stupid, because almost all hentai characters are stupid especially those in Vanilla Hentai.

Honestly I usually prefer NTR at this point just because the antagonist is actually working to get the girl rather than just having her magically fall into his lap like most vanilla hentai.

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CDub if you think people are honestly mad at NTR because of stupid plots I'm just gonna have to disagree, because if dumb and repetitious plots got people's goats you'd see just as much rage in the torrents of cookie cutter vanilla that get posted here too. You don't even see this much rage in outright rape porn. People just get mad because you can rape and psychologically and physically abuse a woman all you want, but if you hurt a guy's feelings oh boy you will unleash the fury of a thousand suns from a legion of NEET's basements.

Personally? I say fap to what you like, and if you don't like, don't read. Carn's a well known NTR artist and we have tags for a reason ;)

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These idiots should be banned from e-hentai.
We don't need another "no trap abgrund" problem.

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thanks a lot man you are the best

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ESP: /g/660899/14767bb506/
RAW: /g/660131/9411c4671f/

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@CDub I agree with you on this and also, why is cdubs comment hidden? It's a decent opinion that's pretty much true.

They might hide this to though.

[EDIT] For the record I feel the same about vanilla and why so much focus on CDub did none of you read Battousai's comment?

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Carn's artstyle is really good, but the plot is really retarded. It doesn't make any sense.

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"Mind-Numbingly Stupid" That more or less describes almost all hentai, but I must agree that it is far more blatant in darker hentai works. Virtually all NTR, Rape, Blackmail, Abuse, and Exploitation stories are ridiculously dumb. And while many Vanilla works are much the same I believe they are generally considered more acceptable because all parties get a 'Happy End'. While in dark hentai the presence of the 'Bad End' makes certain characters unacceptably stupid for willingly going along with the plot. There is also the Sheep/Wolf argument where the reader either identifies with the victim or the transgressor. Those who identify with the 'victim' tend to be socially well adjusted human beings, while those who identify with the transgressor tend to be the minority of the population with the A-Social or criminal mentality.

This actually makes for a rather interesting study in cultural mores, taboos, and laws. Though I have doubts any self respecting professor would accept any term paper based on the study of hentai porn... except at Berkley.

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That fat dude's name is Kirito

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Thank you, notnaserrot! I really appreciate it.

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is this complete? i sure hope not... i still want more :(

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Is it just me or does Manager-san look like a Japanese Hank Hill. Look closely at page 2.

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Why are people so mad about this one? This is barely even NTR the loser bately even has dialogue

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@battusai

>fiction work
>getting mad over hentai

i might be a vanillafag but srsly everyone has its own fetish and thus respect them, you are making yourself look like a gigantic asshole

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Not much to get mad about. Yeah NTR themed stories are dark and some make you think "WTF", but to be honest the girls in them are either dumb or slus. Not to mention the guys that are being cheated on are mostly weak willed, clueless, or just down right DUMB.

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I dont get the story... what is she realizing on page 81???

Ive been impregnated? whats that supposed to mean? New pregnancy? or was she pregnant all the time????

And what does the manager mean on page 84 with "you did it."

I dont get it. Please elaborate

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What retard vetoed the rape tag? This needs a rape tag and clearly fits into the rape tag.

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Really, all you vanillafags and NTRfags are arguing over nothing. Because at the end of the day you all fucking degenerates.

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Netoshit is just terrible, its a scummy bottom-feeder genre. The artist created shallow characters with a generic and moronically common plot.

Your Down-votes, they give me power. <>_<>

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@kocy,
Basically the manager congratulate her for successfully tricking her bf to marry her and think the child is his.
The child is obviously the manager's.

After Page 82, she can just say the bf have sex with her while drunk or something and he will never know.
Unless they do DNA test.

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It is Carn. Of course the plot is the same boring shit as ever.

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love it thanks

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If i'm not mistaken on chapter 3.5 she already has a son or daughter right ???

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So...
Manager got her preg.
then made her abort
then got her preg again
she marry her bf

Man this was fucking good, ty for your work!

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