Who said true love can't be erotic?
You don't have to put a wedding dress on it, or have some popular artist drop by to work on it to show Kaga-san is the best girl in the fleet.
Oh, and somebody call Mikorin. That uniform looks suspiciously like miko attire.

I guess you're improving a little after four translations. So good job, maybe? But good lord, your editing is still quite bad.

Your grammar is bad enough that I question the accuracy of your translations. Stuff like this really shouldn't have made it past QC.
"Please excuse me for bothering you ." [sic]
"What would have done if Akagi-san really did see us?"
"How can you say that."

Your font choice is marginally improving, but I'm not sure why you don't just use Wild Words or Zud Juice or whatever. You also don't use a different font for moans. It doesn't look like you ever changed font size to get words to fit better in bubbles. At least you're not hyphenating words at stupid places, good job there.

Lastly, only one page, page 16, is actually in black in white, every other page is in color. But even that one page is still RGB, not grayscale.

All this is incredibly disappointing not just because some people, but not everyone, demand quality in translations. But because it's obvious that you spent a great deal of time redrawing those pain-in-the-ass transparent bubbles, and most of the redraws actually look decent, which is legitimately laudable.

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i dunno i thought the font was alright but that's just me

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아싸 이거 누가 안하면 내가 해야지

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Good doujinshi, it begins a bit too slow but overall is a very good book, personally I enjoy the most the second half of the doujinshi, really thanks a lot for the translation.
BTW I would love to see a sequel.

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YES!! Kaga-san just sank my Battleship!.

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Wait, these girls are ships, right? Shouldn't they always be full of seamen?

...sorry. I'll leave now.

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Wow, little miss wavedash, you're a bit of an asshole! If they are improving, let them improve at their own pace, quit expecting everything to be top notch including different font types and grammar, and quit demanding something of someone who is doing something of their own volition! (And put your condescension on a shelf, too - your pessimistic angle and negative exaggerations are completely unnecessary.)

Last edited on 07 April 2016, 19:35.

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need reseed pls ty

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淑女 (shofu) can be read as wonna?

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