*updating cover for third chapter

I'm a little conflicted on bits of the story here... namely the dialog after the main character reveals he's a virgin. For all the booze that was around his best friend didn't have any? And on top of that, the whole speech about virginity not being a mark of shame and all that was WAY too eloquent to be spur of the moment thought and, instead of coming across as a conviction the character has, sounds more like preachy crud. Now, I agree with the sentiment, but I'm not exactly making a comic where two-three whole pages are dedicated to a character talking about it in a seemingly out of character moment. Honestly, I kinda read that part in my mind like a robot from how forced it sounded.

Other than that, it's an interesting set up, fantastically done art, and a couple of amusing moments in it. I'd say it's about 3 1/2 to 4 stars. That sudden moment of forced morality killed my boner pretty good.

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This isn't the Collector's Edition!! You downloaded my galleries and re-posted them in one upload! These pictures have the same name and resolution as mine!!

Part 1: /g/681673/6fce114163/
Part 2: /g/689311/5290e28d30/
Part 3: /g/697554/f14b47cba0/

SAME EXACT PICTURES!!

All you did was add the "Collector's Edition" cover to the front!

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You have a really bad habit of uploading things that are already here. That's pretty fucking sad :/

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srsly these were uploaded months ago and you copied them you idiot

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One of those very weird cases, where with one, you have a gallery that has everything except the "main cover"... and then the other you have a gallery with a the cover... but is missing a page...

Both galleries are coming up to 60 pages, but they should be 61 (one needs a cover, the other needs a missing page). I guess it's the case of, whoever fixes up their gallery first gets it? But even then, raichupal, I believe you could still edit your gallery to make it complete, since you were the original poster.

Edit: And yeah, adding a cover, does count as "more complete", I've seen this situation a couple of times before, and it usually ends by either the original poster fixing their gallery, or the newly uploaded gallery going forward while the previous gets expunged. It's kind of a rough rule, but it is one and it has happened, sadly.

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