Translated by pesu, edited by HerpaDerpMan

Fixes to pages 5, 9, and 15.

This is my first attempt at editing/redrawing a colored doujin. If you have experience and see anything out of place, please shoot me a message and tell me.

If you want to translate this into a different language, I have the PSD files; PM me for them.

Happy reading!

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Great work with the redraws; a few iffy spots if you look really closely, but they're few and far between. If I had to criticize something, it'd probably be management of non-text in bubbles could use some work. See first bubble of page 5 and bottom left bubble of page 15; hearts could be moved so they don't interfere with text placement/shape.

Also, first bubble of page 9.

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Free milk supply for life <3

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Page 03: 'ahem' It is important for us to remember that breast milk is essentially White Blood. Therefor anyone who regularly imbibes in milk is a Vampire...

A Titty Vampire.

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@Hezard If you want to think of it that way, then all milk is White Blood, as it all comes from the breast of some creature... So does that mean everyone is a titty vampire? .-.

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"Take responcibility, okay?"

Okay. <3

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It looks like this clearly takes place before the events of Mountain of Faith. I mean honestly it seems this Sanae was the one in her old life aka her pre-gensokyo life. Also why does it seem that in the last panel Sanae was wearing two sets of bras instead of one?

Last edited on 20 November 2016, 02:34.

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