Raw: /g/698402/bf67eacfca/

A Magic the Gathering card in my hentai? This need to done so more often.

Base +5, Marz +6, Nemesis2000 +5, kuroshinko +9, stupid army +7, kamikamyu +4, dementio +6, Clitoman +4, Baka_Ouji +6, Zas921 +6, KomeijiFanclub +5, George642 +8, knucklesluigi +6, and 4 more...

The Magic the Gathering references are real.

Base +4, Sharpiwi +13

Oh man magic... it would be hilarious if the next card was an UNHINGED card called "THE Mindslaver"

Base +4, Vanndril +7, Ooe Kintarou +3

and I though this is im@s cinderella dojin (shibuya rin)

Base +26, MC Arisato +6, Lens +7, Dairy fun +4, B4z73rd +6

Would had been great if he wasn't your typical whimpy loser. At least make him the typical fat old ugly guy with a big cock or something.

Base +5, Ganein -7, IntarwebzFTW -6, Yoruichi_rules -7, whatever1877 -4, Ficfactor +7, openminded20 -6, dart_ace2ace -8, johnlocke357 -6, gweh -6, Tufao -7, Vivi1993 -9, Ice Cream -30, and 1 more...

The NTR part in this was so retardedly forced.

Base +15, troll445 +6, UnknowDestroyer +6, Ficfactor +7, dart_ace2ace +8, Reaper01 +6, 1776XKCD +5, jaix9 +6, lknd14 +6, scrappy135 +7, zinos6 +8, Kyunny +4, Solipsist +6, and 18 more...

This reads like someone was just making a mind control doujin, then went "OH SHIT! I need to throw in a bunch of generic fetishes!"

Base +6, troll445 +6, 1776XKCD +5, Zantos -6, Tufao +7, Vivi1993 +9, Ooe Kintarou +3, Dairy fun +4, Ficfactor +9, lolgay2 +8, pingui7 +6, Limited -8, tobeunforgiven2 +14, and 1 more...

Pretty standard MC(Mind Control)... it starts out really good and then they have to just fill it with junk- pregnancy, pissing, ntr, gang-rape... All I want is a fun MC harem, is that too much to ask for?

Base +6, GravityCat -7, ThunderKurono +6, Zantos -6, Solipsist +6, Vivi1993 +9, lolgay2 +8, Limited -8, MeloTheYellow -6, jindoko90 +6, akunoko -28, MelmothTheWanderer +33

This time it was kind of a half-assed job for drain. You can totally feel it at that last NTR part. He should try aiming for more extreme or complete works. At least his art always does it for me.

Base +7, Solipsist +6, Vivi1993 +9, Ooe Kintarou +3, lolgay2 +8, Sharpiwi +13, akunoko -28, MelmothTheWanderer +11

@SCSS

This had NTR?!

Base +7, tobeunforgiven2 +14

The lewd adventures of NotRin

Base +7, Lens +7, Feladrance +6

donde hallo la 1 en spanish please

thank you! for the aport

ojala traduzacas este doujin

sigue subiendo mas de estos

thank you for rhe aport!

espero que haya la 3ª part!

sigue subiendo mas

Last edited on 11 November 2014, 18:05.

Base +2, zukuenft -9, sonnytag123 -7, tobeunforgiven2 -14, Sharpiwi -13

if anyone is interested, there is the first part translated:
/g/480711/36ba0d505d/

Base +8, Vivi1993 +9, Ooe Kintarou +4, Ficfactor +9, akunoko -28, MelmothTheWanderer +33, Storm4n +6, ayashi9 +6

Or maybe he should've tried to keep it good until the end, without ruining it like a fool just to be an edgelord. It's very rare for him to write anything decent.

Base +4, Solipsist +6, Vivi1993 +9, cochrane +14, lolgay2 +8, pingui7 +6, Limited -8, necrosis527 +10, Amauri14 +6, Sharpiwi +13

2 page NTR nice one

Base +5, Vivi1993 -9, Limited +8, akunoko -28, MelmothTheWanderer +33

subhuman cucks please die

Base +6, Limited -8, AncientPhoenix -7, hoyle -6, tobeunforgiven2 -14, Sharpiwi +13, akunoko +28, MelmothTheWanderer -30

Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

Base +8, Limited +8, MelmothTheWanderer +33

i can never not hate this ending. like it was hypnotic bullshit at first but then it got nice everyone was happy end then you fuck it up with this shit and its like A:there is no setup to this and B: how did the MC not hypnotize everyone that bullies him so he could avoid this its ridiculous and makes this a worthless sequel

Base +6, tobeunforgiven2 -14, akunoko +28, MelmothTheWanderer -30