Read left to right.
page 4 panel 2: I guess the bubbles point to the wrong pokemon respectively.
At least it makes more sense the other way around^^

Base +6, observer1980 +21, spark0508 -3, Ryodragon +4, platerat -3, lovehcomics +20, FlowerSlaughter +7

good story so far! i love it

Base +5, observer1980 +21, spark0508 -3, Ryodragon +4, yunimaster2 +5, XyonFox +4, platerat +3

Finally some Mawile Hentai <3 I was waiting for that since Gen 3

Base +5, spark0508 -3, Ryodragon +4, Moldo +5, XyonFox +4, yunimaster2 +5, platerat +3, lovehcomics +20

Would it have killed them to use a little punctuation? Most of the bubbles read borderline robotic.

Base +11, platerat -3

That line in page 14 "you take double the damage in battle but double the pleasure in bed". Pure genius!!!!

Base +7, XyonFox +4, platerat +3, lovehcomics +20

There is mawile in it so its good, even if its from palcomix

Base +4

Hmmm... That part about double pleasure in bed. Lucario is one of my favorite pokemon and he's weak against fire, so I saw some hentai called "Playing with fire" where a female Blaziken and a male Scizor "do it." Was not a fan of Scizor, but Blaziken... would be great with Lucario! and Blaziken is a fire type!

Base +1

I hate when nipples look like painful zits.

Base +4