3rd translation work, as always feedback is much appreciated.

Raw: /g/656989/22ec07c44d/

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Thank you!

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whoa, suddenly domestic abuse at the end RIP

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@SpyManHAW

yeah, I was quite confused when that came up, in the text.

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a very tender mom-son story. lucky son got to do it bare back and creampie his momma!

thanks for the share

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Appreciate the translation @klownboy.
Overall the translation seems pretty good but the wording needs a little work.
Well, practice will make perfect though. Looking forward for your future translations. ^_^

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@shinangels

thank you, I think that might be coming from me trying to stay as close as I can to the original japanese.
hopefully you'll see less and less of the awkward wording in future translations.
this is something I'm actively trying to get better at :3

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You, klownboy, I like you! Keep up!

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@Larrot

Thank you :3

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that ending suddenly got dark.

Love this work, but geez.

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