Phew, it's done ! As I promised, a re-edition for Deep Snow 5 !

This time... If, they are a bother for you, please tell me where are the typos, I'll edit it. I'm a non-native english speaker, so my grammar is kinda... Well, I'm not pretty confident about it so, just by myself, I'll not try to change something else than spelling errors in the script.

Anyway, I hope you'll like it !

Previous chapters:
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Special thanks to hardicondor for the translation !

page 8: "Late night visite" <-- visit
page 15: "Brithday present" <-- birthday

That's all! ;) Good job. The translation's grammar is pretty good.

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So far this series has been pretty good, thanks for continuing your work on it Shinko.Aelith

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Thank you based bro!

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You're welcome Hezard, ero-Onizuka (and it would be "sis" instead of "bro" ^^)!
I guess, if Kawaisounako release a new chapter in the future I'll be volunteer to edit it if needed.

Edit :
@Red_Piotrus : no, we didn't use the bounty system here, hardicondor translated it independently.

Last edited on 30 October 2014, 07:19.

Base +6, Kuro Yuuki +3, Melez +12, fired up +7

This is not an EHCOVE release?

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Art 6. Plot 6. Sexiness 5. Translation 6. True to character 6. All out of 10.

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