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Page 3-5 you can see where the japanese text was erased, since the color didn't exactly match the white of the background.
Rest looks good. Thanks for the translation.

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Nice story, but you have to really know the backgrounds of Koishi and Kokoro to know whats going on.

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This could and should be delved into more. But doesn't Kokoro know, no one dies in Gensokyo

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No people dies in Gensokyo, Akyuu need to die to return as her descendants.

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This hits close to home, having someone be hopelessly better than you. To have someone surpass you in skill without any real effort, and to pass you with only pure innate skill in itself.

It's something we can all realize.

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futo at page 7

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Whenever artists do still pictures of Kokoro dancing (e.g. p. 13), all I can see in my mind's eye is that she's doing some kind of weird semaphore.

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