Hey this is not half bad . Will return to make a better review when I finish the comic.
Edit: I found myself skipping most of the narrator boxes at around 20 pages in. They seemed very unnecessary and didn't really contribute much to the story as much as just looking at the image itself. Do , however, read all the bubbles. Other than that, it was alright. It wasn't bad. It wasn't AMAZING either but it wasn't bad.