Translated by anidra

Base +6, aken909 +7, mizzigianni +4

awsome,please can you translate the other namiroji?

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the fourth girl

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Base +2

I would say you should try working on the alignment of your text. Sometimes, the words squish together in some word bubbles, and others have things like the names being broken up to fit them. This just makes things a little difficult to read at times. Beyond that, the English isn't too bad, but certainly may prove difficult to tolerate by others.

Base +7, zzl4100598 +19, mizzigianni +4

scat is better with yaoi and furry

Base +6, darcmistespilon -9, rippy77 -6, Xephites -6, lunue -4, Zee capten -6, Taka at work -6, mizzigianni -4, Dark Nexus -6, akscpaieki -6, moeeno -1, Flan-chan -15, pepedid911 -3