This was a commission I quite liked the story of, but I'm not at all satisfied with the outcome. Obviously, I didn't have a tablet yet, so I had to do with pencils. Also I left this out of my artist gallery, because it would definitely have been voted down.

A tablet is not the answer to everything that's wrong with this.

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@nuditry: visually, it is. Otherwise blame the commissioner. Which is exactly why I didn't mention any usernames. And if this is another of those references towards the fetishes being involved: how many times...?
Anyway, this gallery already serves it's purpose. Otherwise, I wouldn't have posted it.

@CheshireSquirrel: I'm genuinely offended by everything you said. Maybe I should have mentioned that this is old (though I have given an indication in the gallery description) and anime is not my drawing style. I rather do semi-realistic.
Anyway, I can't understand people, who hate certain galleries just enough to comment and make people feel bad about themselves. I suggest you use the artist tag on the top of the page to find my other work. If you do so or have already done so and still maintain your opinion, you are not capable of fair judgement. Actually, here you go: /g/800022/b7cbe2d524/
On Eka's portal and Deviantart I have loads of watchers and faves, just not on this (mainly because this isn't even on my deviantart page). Therefore, I agree with you on the point of releasing it to the general public, but that's only because I know there are many people who are disgusted and outraged by vore and roasting people.

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Alright, I understand. You're quite right. I don't think it's that big of a deal, though. Some actually like this kind of drawing, though they are few. Personally, I think the worst thing is that most older stuff I made was way better. I suppose I shouldn't have posted it, but it's too late for that now.

@smurf123: That's an interesting point :) I see what you mean. Of course, I just didn't have anything else at hand and the commissioner wanted colour so I kinda had to do it like this. I do know the commissioner had lots of artists do about the same thing where sailor saturn was a preditor. I don't really understand it, but everyone likes what they like. no arguing with that.

@atropos: it's both, but I always wait for others to tag my galleries. And what else is wrong with this gallery, eh?

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The fact that you are capable of drawing doesn't mean that you can draw. You can't. However I admire your courage (or recklessness) for releasing this to general public. I know I wouldn't.

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The gallery you linked to is much better indeed. Sorry, but this one reminds me of the best days of my kindergarten - except I'm pretty much sure I wasn't into vore and guro back then. The thing is that I wouldn't really dare release things I made in kindergarten, you just did, and by doing thus you give yourself a bad name. Not everything you make is worth releasing, certain stuff belongs in the drawer, and should never find its way out of it. Sorry if you feel offended, but perhaps you should think twice before letting people see things like this, otherwise you simply expose yourself to negativity.

Last edited on 11 April 2015, 21:11.

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Crayons just makes shit not look horrible and bad. It takes all the wrongness out of it. To me this is more naive and childish than anything, shocking and wrong aint even a factor despite the content.

Its mildly interesting because its the first time ive seen stuff like this. Or noticed it at all maybe. Vore and cannibalism is just "oh you internet" for me and this is like a joke of some kind. Like a kid whos just messing around for no reason other than that there are crayons around and is pissed of at sailor moon. I dont know. Its interesting due to the mix.

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Wait... You people aren't hating on the vore (genuine shock!), but you're hating on the coloring job? No one is good at everything. Some people, myself included, find their talents lie in other aspects of illustrating. And if it's the medium used for coloring that you're hating, then that's personal prejudice that shouldn't be brought up at all. Constructive criticism is always welcomed by artists, but criticism just to criticise is incredibly offensive. Anyway, what's wrong with Pencil Crayons?

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For one, this isn't Sailor Moon, it's Cardcaptor Sakura.

For two, everything else that's wrong with this gallery!

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I loved this. This story was real straight forward, the cover pic wasn't misleading at all, points for traditional media, I understood what was going on without dialog (bold move not using MSPaint to add it in post), I'm even left with mystery! Why did Saturn eat them? What was her motivation?

All in all, the comments are why I gave this gallery a five star rating. Hey, everyone starts somewhere and we need freaks willing to boldly draw insane, impossible bullshit; it's what makes hentai great. After what might be called "reading" this comic I took a look at the other stuff by this artist. This is obviously an early work, there should be no reason to point that out. Hell, the things I've drawn look like garbage. I'm rightfully ashamed of them and wouldn't upload them with a gun to my head. Seeing another artist ballsy enough to post something you might find stuck to the fridge… well, for starters I think you need to call child services but also I think it's great for the perspective.

I see a lot of art that I can't help to admire. Slugbox, Shadman, Yuji, Taishi, Tofu-san, even the style of Okina Flying Factory and recently the non-H works of Okada Manabi. I see these stunning pieces of art and think I'll never measure up. Maybe. Maybe not. I'm kind of rambling now so that's it.

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