Sort of... all over the place, wasn't it?

Base +6, MSTGMA +7, Buttlad +6, ecuedxe +3, stabbybelkar +7, Wakiza +11, Grunt Arbiter +8, NeitherMyName +6

This comic shows, what happens if you move too fast between the pages and panels. It is a mess, no one is able to understand the story nor the sex going on. Way more pages and panels are needed.

Base +6, MSTGMA +7, Buttlad +6, ecuedxe +3, stabbybelkar +7, Grunt Arbiter +8, NeitherMyName +6, Sigma Shinori +4

The art itself is actually pretty good, but it just goes too fast. It's like the artist had all those ideas for a big long setup that would have lasted 5 chapters, and tried to throw it all in 20 pages.

Base +6, NeitherMyName +6

Did someone put up a ych comic and get too many respondents? 8 girls having sex independently (well, mostly in pairs) in 21 pages is no way to stay coherent. Which is a shame because all of the ladies are rather cute, and the art is quite good.

For those who are looking for something that makes an ounce of sense, look elsewhere. for people looking for the orgy equivalent of a playboy pictorial? This will work for you.

Base +5