Translation by Ragged Translations
Editing by anon (No, not the angry anti-crack anon)

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/783410/

https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=120270

http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/28/69/040030286954.html

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=49501699

http://www9.wind.ne.jp/kuusou/

Base +34, Dan75 +9, Spherius +4, Lin Setsu A +20, @43883 +34, Dnkz +49

Good. Sayaka. We don't need any Butthurt fanboys swarming the comments this time.

Base +9, Dan75 +9, PersonaFan08 +13, Spherius +4, Abarrow +6, Sokengo -5, Bio-Hazard -5, @43883 +34, pioduh +10, VInuclus +5, see-eff +6, a546488051 +6

This one was great. It analyzed their relationship dynamics and applied an actual story of how they established their relationship. Good Good.

Base +6, Dan75 +9, Spherius +4, Abarrow +6, Sokengo -5, Bio-Hazard -5, 8055 +10, KrystalKross23 +4, VInuclus +5, Razor7557 -7, see-eff +6, Serena Lea +5

The story in this was one hell of a meandering stretch. I don't think it was the translation, as this author can be like that, but this was more than any other work of his I've read.

It's nice that he tried to reconcile cannon, but it just came out weird.

Base +5, Spherius +4, Rankarana -6, Dibbz +6, Bobthegoose -3

Thanks for translating

Is there a repeat of pages on 31 and 32?

I might be confused

Base +9, Spherius +4, Serena Lea +5

(つд⊂)
(ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟДﾟ)
(ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟДﾟ)

Base +2, Spherius +4

It got some parts spot on, but other parts were pretty melodramatic and stepping over the line which kind of ruins everything it set up.

Base +6, DaxterSpeed -10

pg 9, "hole and despair" should be "hope and despair", and also I see some repeating pages.

Base +6

Finally, a Madoka doujin that captures the characters and despair of the series perfectly.

Base +6, Sokengo -5, patterned +6, Serena Lea +5

Didn't really get what was going on, but kudos to pikachi for trying something new.

Base +6

English translations!! Thanks!!

Base +3

KyoSaya hatesex is the best kind of KyoSaya.

Base +8, see-eff +6