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Fuuka, not "kazebana".

Base +8

I personally found this a bit disappointing. Felt short, even though it's about as long as the other Persona works produced by this artist. A number of missed opportunities as well.

Pages 3-5. Across these three pages where Minato's giving Yukari the business, we never actually see her vagoo getting ploughed, as the angles provided completely obscure the action. While it could be said that this subtle ambiguity adds a layer of eroticism, you can't deny that seeing a cavern being excavated by a big drill is satisfying to watch, especially if you're a fan of Yuka-tard.

Page 6. Fuuka comes across the used condom involved in said business... on top of Minato's bin, where literally anyone with a pair of eyes can see it. You'd think a guy would at least tuck it under a few layers of tissues. Potential wasted opportunity, as Fuuka could've smelt the smellz and raided the bin for evidence, get some of that covert pervert eroticism, y'know?

Page 7. I'm sorry, but recycling the Yukari ploughing is really lame. Fuuka had a completely different angle of viewing, so the artist could've quickly doodled two new business pictures.

Pages 11-13. What is this masturbating nonsense, where's the pre-sex blowjob, where's the bit where Minato's prodding Fuuka's face with his dick and poking it into her mouth and she cums from that, what is this kissing shit, the fuck outta here.

Page 18. He fucking missed with the cumshot. Could've coated her face and unusually large forehead with his seed, but nope, he fucking missed. Literally straight past her. Disgrace.

Page 19. He fucking missed AGAIN. If you're not gonna smother her face in semen, at least cum in her mouth for goodness' sake, don't just shoot lazily to the left. It's another instance of obscured action as well - we never actually see Fuuka's mouth getting dicked, only a bit of licking. The right panel is decent enough, but it goes to waste as it's not complimented by actually showing mouth-dicking in another panel. There's an absence of hearts as well, probably one of the most effective subtle erotic techniques in the world of hentai as it shows sexual enjoyment without explicitly stating it.

Page 20. Damn, Aigis, what happened to your legs? They're all short and stumpy and weird, almost as if the artist lacks depth perception.

I've enjoyed this artist's previous Persona works and was hyped for this one, but it's unmistakably lacking, which is a shame.

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