Posting in accordance with the poor grammar tag.
Page 3: "Is the seven..."
Page 5: "I never gonna get tired..."
Page 6: "You now I was waiting for you to come home soon"
Page 10: "I'm going late to school"
Page 11: "Shit now what I do?"
Page 12: "...get rewards in Patreon.com/Felsata"

Base +11, Kenyenzie +6, todd67 +4

Sorry for the bad translation, English is not my first language, if someone can do it better, go ahead.

Base +4, Kenyenzie +6, todd67 +4, Bswags456 +1, BubbaJ +6

Can we get an 'Uncanny Valley' Tag?

Base +8, NickKatz +2, Kenyenzie +6, Friedrice26 +4, todd67 +4, zmackay +3, BubbaJ -6

@felsala
Please visit this site's forum: https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showforum=81
We will gladly help you with fixing English grammar in your works and grammar check your future translations, all you need to do is just ask.

Base +19, Kenyenzie +6, Lowan Myein +1, todd67 +4, BubbaJ +6

warmth, re-read the definition, material containing grammatical or spelling errors that occurred in the original work are excluded.

Base +55, todd67 +4

Aw crap how's she gonna pay the delivery man when she doesn't have any money?

Base +1, MoonShine +7