https://members.luscious.net/users/VictorDoUrden/

I colored the pages I like. Have no plans whatsoever to do more then that.

What a nice surprise this TL is!

Last edited on 26 August 2015, 14:59.

Base +5, GuroLover12 -9, Kreel +6, Panda Beach -11, Hyoros -13

different version
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Last edited on 26 August 2015, 13:44.

Base +15, GuroLover12 -9, Kreel +6, Pillowgirl +21, lacus1 +12, Marisa Kirisame +7

Wont lie this is eerily unsexy even if i do like emotionless ones, i guess tis due to my dislike for blackmail

Base +8, Victor DoUrden +13, Tufao -8, myaccount05 -6, JoeCoolSoe -6, Predawned -6, ThisIs_MyName +6, FertyJukli -6, ctrlc -6, Nausea -7, Hyoros -13, MelmothTheWanderer -30

>ruining people's artwork with your shitty 5th grade coloring skills

Base +8, carrierpidgeon -5, yukkurikeeper +6, FertyJukli +6, ctrlc +6, HabaneroJim -13, Nausea +7, Panda Beach +11, Hyoros -13

The artwork is pretty minimal, but done by a good artist. The dialogue is very good though, very sexy. They made a very sexually engaging situation, even if there isn't much to it.

The artwork wasn't that overly complex or detailed. There is a great deal of difference in the art quality and time invested between the cover art and the bulk of the manga pages. Though, with colored cover art present I do feel that the colorist should have tried to color sample from the existing colored cover art and maintain those tones. Having at least consistency in hair color of the colored pages would have been rather desirable. That said, coloring takes time, and I feel that the coloring job does add some to the doujin rather than detract from it as some may accuse.

Art 4. Plot 7. Sexiness 9. Coloring 5. Translation 6. True to character 6. All out of 10.

Base +7