My main issue with this artist is the same as his other work (can you make that to go) He has this weird tendency to tell not show which given the fact that art is a visual media kind of detracts from it.
I find myself enthralled, though the best I can see happening is her still hooking to make ends meet while he scrounges for money in his job. I don't see anything happening between the two of them, least of all being sex.